New Villager V

This is a comic based on the second character I made, who I named V. Yes, I know two characters can't interact in the game but this isn't a game now is it. And yes her design is based off the alt costume for villager, for which I use. Here is what the story is:

"Isabelle informs the mayor (me) that a new villager has moved in. As mayor, he goes over to welcome the new villager. He and V greet each other, and the mayor ask what she plans on doing in Tazmily. V plans on making a special house, with an arcade on the main floor, a cafeteria on the left wing, a library on the right wing, a gym in the back room, and a spa in the basement, with her room in the top floor, open for everyone. The only problem was the lack of bells, the fact that she needs to pay off loans when expanding her house, and the fact that it is difficult to earn bells in the Fall and Winter. Of course the mayor won't turn down a villager in need, and agrees to help her, to V's delight. First, she had to pay off loans whenever she expanded her house, and the only best way to make money was fishing. Also, whenever she did favors for the other villagers, she would often get something for the rooms like a pinball machine for the arcade. Also, the mayor, being rich, donated some of his money to her. In no time, V's loans were paid off, and all that was left is to make the rooms. She and the mayor sat together on one of the benches in the town. They have known each other for a couple of months, and in that time, something grew between them. They knew what it was as the two leaned over for a kiss."

What do you think? Also, that squirrel villager is Marshal if anyone wanted to know.